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Untitled Shark Piece by ~Aramina48:iconAramina48:



I went for my daily swim this morning, not expecting anything unusual.  On a whim I decided to swim up into the shallows farther than I ever had before.  The tide was getting ready to go back out, but I didn’t notice because I was hungry and wanted to eat a few little fish for breakfast.

I went too far in, though, as I quickly discovered.  The cool tide receded and left me stranded on the beach.  I lay there for what seemed like hours, the sun beating hotly down on me.  Just as I felt myself slipping away into darkness, something pulled at me.  I could no longer feel the cool sand beneath me.  Warm air surrounded my weakened body and suddenly all feeling slipped away.  I seemed to float for a moment, and then everything went black, darker than the deepest depths of the ocean.

When I awoke, mere moments ago, I was in cold, clear water again.  And now I am swimming in circles because my ocean water is gone, as is the vastness of it.  There are borders here, boundaries that I cannot push past.  They are clear, though; I can see through them.  There are things outside, brown things, with orange and blue parasites.  They are staring at me, watching me, but I ignore them; I am beginning to think they are the ones who brought me here, to this prison.  I would rather have died, hot and dehydrated, in the sand, than live here in my cold, watery prison.
©2005-2009 ~Aramina48
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Author's Comments

So...this is based on the same painting that ~Eynjehl based this on. I cannot for the life of me find the painting; it was these two black men, wearing orange shirts and (I believe) blue jean shorts and carrying a shark between them. So if you know what painting it is, who painted it, etc, please tell me!!! Anyway, short piece I wrote when I was in a bad mood.

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:iconeynjehl:
;__; Poor miserable shark... It's cool that you wrote from his point of view though, rather than outsiders like I did. :thumbsup:

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Do I want shelter from the rain?
Or the rain to wash me away....
:iconaramina48:
I liked yours a lot better lol
:iconillusionaryfaith:
This is really interesting, because of the point of view. nice =)

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